This is for editing the appointed paragraph and sentences to make those fit the context of the whole statement. 1. In terms of vocabulary and grammar structure, I also want it to be highly advanced; should be a composition of conciseness, denseness, and clearness. 2. And of course, reiteration of vocabulary or incongruity between the context should not exist. If any, please kindly have it modified. (In this regard, of course, please be in considering the other parts as well) 3. For the first part(number 1) condense it to 120-130words (current 184words) ; after the process, it should still have key messages I intended For the second part, adjustment for the number of words is not necessary; just kindly make it more concise, denser, and clearer as much as it could be. For the third part, same with the second part.