Hello, I have this research paper that I need edited. Please read through these comments and those made on the paper, and let me know if this is something you would be interested in doing? Here are a few key overall thoughts…. 1. Chp 1 needs a summary section 2. You have too many direct quotes. You should have more a similarity report of more than 25% really – there are major sections you can paraphrase. 3. All your reference in text should be like (Gasman, 2019). Notice no J. in the text. Just last name and year – unless it is a direct quote then you need the page #. And in the back your reference need to be in alphabetical order. 4. In most every situation don’t say “The article, or the authors or even title of things. Just use authors names with year. You’ll see this throughout your paper. Not sure I caught them all but this needs a careful edit. 5. A few places you need to clarify more. I was confused on that you mean. 6. In chapter 3 you really don’t have a section on Implications for Professional Practice. In that section you wrote about research so that info needs to be move to that section. And in the Implications section, which should be pages lone, you state your advice based off all you learned. You’ve asked some good questions, found the answers, now what do YOU have to say. What is your advice to schools, nonprofit agencies, the government, etc. What do you have to say. And be SURE if you based your advice on the literature you reference it. Something like, Given the findings of Gasman (2019), schools should consider…….. This section needs to be well developed.