Respond critically to significant connections across texts, supported by evidence

Respond critically to significant connections across texts, supported by evidence

You need to read the book 1984, Brave New World, and watch the movie Gattaca, V for Vendetta. I have already write the draft already, but teacher doesn’t satisfied. You need to fix it but had better to keep the four themes of my essay not to be changed. The following is the achievement standard and my draft.