I need to take all the parts and make it into one coherent Thesis. I’ll need it to be corrected according to comments in the file. I’ll need some of the things analyzed and paraphrased. Ill need rewriting of some parts of the paper. I need it all to be edited technically as well I’ll need it with high academic English *the whole thing needs to be 70 pages maximum. *some of the comments and the interviews are in Hebrew- please use google translate *chapter 3 ill send in the next 1-2 days but for now we can start already.