What has been my personal experience as a group member

What has been my personal experience as a group member

This essay needs to be done on a personal level extensive creative content needed 3 files uploaded are as follows ; 1 st are my current information content to be explained in a more detailed and personal matter 2nd doc1 – this is my friends essay which had a good pass ratio and serves as an information example that I need to base my personal essay 3rd Doc2 – is my actual essay which was essentially marked negative as it was too academic and did not comply with necessary personal journey information however I need to redo the essay ASAP