What role did ancient chinese medicine, specifically Phycadelics, play in modern asain culture.

What role did ancient chinese medicine, specifically Phycadelics, play in modern asain culture.

Good work! On parenthetical citations, consult: https://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/747/02/ The paper needs some cleanup. Read through it a couple times, out loud, then have a second set of eyes take a look. Consult: https://undergrad.stanford.edu/tutoring-support/hume-center/resources/student-resources/grammar-resources-writers/top-twenty-errors-undergraduate-writing You have a basic thesis in your intro, but I think you might want to re-word it. I was confused, especially by the idea of “rich recreational and identification cultures”… Also: I think you can flesh it out a bit more. Include not just the “what” but also the “how” and the “why.” The rest of your essay should be a systematic attempt to defend that proposition. Feel free to send me a revised thesis for critique anytime. 2-3 more pages need to be added to this assignment and this needs to be completed by July 16th.